tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7195261806527133486.post8521221482484596021..comments2023-06-16T04:01:30.546-07:00Comments on The Wizards of Ur: "Echoes" page sixChuckwheelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11650404602202715591noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7195261806527133486.post-31735666356520155642008-03-18T13:41:00.000-07:002008-03-18T13:41:00.000-07:00Glad to get some outside feedback on the script. ...Glad to get some outside feedback on the script. <BR/>I really tried to keep this one short and simple, but I guess it just ain't in me!<BR/><BR/>CydAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7195261806527133486.post-62601461537725489372008-03-13T14:04:00.000-07:002008-03-13T14:04:00.000-07:00Cyd must be thanked for the script. Based on my wo...Cyd must be thanked for the script. Based on my world, of course, and on events described in Seven Arrows. Very cool actually. But I feel like I didn't do his script justice. In hindsight I would have let the story breath more and went for an extra 10 pages or so.James V. Westhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07941310158122225850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7195261806527133486.post-50120353706875680602008-03-13T11:04:00.000-07:002008-03-13T11:04:00.000-07:00There are always so many evocative thoughts and i...There are always so many evocative thoughts and ideas in your stories. Very cool.Chuckwheelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650404602202715591noreply@blogger.com