The tail of a balloon should follow an invisible line straight to the speaker's mouth. In panel 1, all your tails point to the bearded guy's chest. In panel 2, his fist is speaking.
Perhaps he has a talking tumor on his chest? Or am I the only one who saw Hellboy 2 here?
I never realized that the arrows HAD to point directly to the mouth, but I think we should listen to the guy who letters the Eisner Award-winning comics!
I love it when beasts have masters! Just as long as it isn't Marc Singer we're good to go!
ReplyDeleteNice work, Mr. Furtado.
Gotta watch those balloon tails, dude. The tail should always point towards the speaker's mouth.
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What did you find confusing?
ReplyDeleteThe tail of a balloon should follow an invisible line straight to the speaker's mouth. In panel 1, all your tails point to the bearded guy's chest. In panel 2, his fist is speaking.
ReplyDeleteAlso, ther personal pronoun "I" should have the crossbars at top & bottom.
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Thanks for the input.
ReplyDeletePerhaps he has a talking tumor on his chest? Or am I the only one who saw Hellboy 2 here?
ReplyDeleteI never realized that the arrows HAD to point directly to the mouth, but I think we should listen to the guy who letters the Eisner Award-winning comics!
The beard does speaketh.
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